a very funky tune from me

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ok, ive never written anything like this before but see what you think. any comments/criticism welcome

its called hip joint
www.soundclick.com/bands/0/doublehelixukmusic.htm

 

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sounds very cool! like the drums and the piano!
all in all its chillin me out which i presume is the desired effect!
would write more but am shattered.
keep it up dude!

 

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thanks for your comments, man. chilling out is indeed the desired effect