finished tune...

sharon Jul 8, 2004

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    Hey Sharon that's great, well done mate. Needs a little work but it's steady :Wink3:
     
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    Nice, very nice! :Grin:

    Took me back a bit - there's definitely some 1996 flava in there (anyone remember 'The Point' club on Tottenham Court Road?...well took me right back there).

    Keep at it!
     
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    Nice work, still the mix could be brighter- and a little fuller-sounding imo. Not really my thing tbh, but enjoyed hearing it.

    Sax James.
     
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    heya,

    nice track! i like the arp bits at the start, the syncopated sound is kewl, and the way the synths' cutoff moves around with the bars is good as well.

    the key synth sounds at 1:50 definitely contribute to the old-skool feeling :Smile3: suitably haunting tho, it's got a nice reflective feel to it.

    it builds nicely as well, i really like the part at 3:15 where the rhythm gets choppier, it's cool & the vocal (is it a chopped vocal?) again gives me old-skool vibes, as do the key sounds after 5:00. i like the soft but squelchy 303 sounds as well!

    if there was anything i would change it would maybe be a few more atmospheric sounds? or possibly some variation in the drum patterns...

    :Smile3:
     
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    Yeah man - top notch. puts me inmind of old stylee Cosmosis - shades of canabanoid - proper stuff. Genuinely entrancing. Perhaps only mod I might desire fur future steerage - breakdown the bassline in a 3:4 offbeat just to make the more wasted among us stagger a bit! Keep brewing them...
     
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    Yeah man - top notch. puts me inmind of old stylee Cosmosis - shades of canabanoid - proper stuff. Genuinely entrancing. Perhaps only mod I might desire fur future steerage - breakdown the bassline in a 3:4 offbeat just to make the more wasted among us stagger a bit! Keep brewing them...
     
  8. sharon

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    :sun: :sun:

    hey thanks for listening and the advise. i still have so much to learn, but am having the time of my life doing so.

    off to glade now..... :partysmi: :party2: :partysmi: :jump: :wizard1:
     
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    ^that sums up making music beautifully :Smile3:
     
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