So, I sorta have this track almost written but as you can tell the production sux 
What am I doing wrong? I've tried everything I could think of but it still sounds awfull.
The track is a bit technoish, but I think I like how it ended up
It aint completely finished yet but I can't make myself do anything with it until I get it to sound better.
http://members.chello.at/dogcow/dogcow%20-...%20soldiers.mp3
Hope that link above works out. Anyway, any suggestions/critics/tips would be well appreciated

What am I doing wrong? I've tried everything I could think of but it still sounds awfull.
The track is a bit technoish, but I think I like how it ended up

http://members.chello.at/dogcow/dogcow%20-...%20soldiers.mp3
Hope that link above works out. Anyway, any suggestions/critics/tips would be well appreciated
