Greentone - Tranquilizer

jackrabbit

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Hi, Welcome to the forum. :ismile:

That tune is bloody beautifull, absolute bliss. Only criticism is drums sounded a bit dated, kick a bit boomy.

Hope you have more like that to play us :icool:
 

OPTOBOT

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its a nice tune but you need some variation in the drums. Although you could keep it with the 'electro' feel, but the drums imho are lacking loads.

Try 'spatiallizing' the hats, make em stereo, nice big hats and whisy crashes,

bounce the kick and snare into loops and fuck with it, reverse bits, put effects over them, mess with the timing.

Youve got some nice 'orbital' style groove going but the percussion beats lack somthing, little blips to keep peoples attention going needs to be added and a few breaks in the drums!

all imho

really nice pads though

pete

feel free to comment on my last demo!

http://www.psy-forum.co.uk/forum/showthread.php?t=38815
 

Zen Cat

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I agree with what's been said on here about the percussion. Needs to be suped up a bit, as it sounds abit weak. However, the pads and synths are really excellent and have a lovely element of depth and dreaminess about them.

I'd like to hear a much fatter kick on this track. The hats could also be a lot clearer and a few more percussive breaks wouldn't go amiss.

Two thumbs up on the pads and synths! :iyes:
 
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