Hopefully inproved version

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If you were unfortunate enough to catch this first time around this is a hopefully improved version of the track I posted a few days ago...I think I've annoyed my neighbours, so please tell me if it was worth it or not! It's the one called dreamtime.
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Well done mate
Thats a blinding improvement, its gone from a scetch to a full blown tune. The levels are spot on, bongo's sound much better. Try a bit of phaser and or delay on the rainstick, might give begening more impact.

Keep it up :iyes:
 

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Thanks for listening again jackrabbit, glad you liked it. I know what you mean about the begining, and there's still a few bits I'm not 100% happy with yet. I'm going to leave it for the moment though as I'm trying to make a darker psychadelic track at the moment. I'll go back to it at some point though. Thanks again!:ismile:
 

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Hey Jibberer!
Howz it man? Thanks for the tips on the basssline this afternoon. Am still working on it, hopefully itill show some improvement by the end of the weekend. :Grin:

Anyway, I am a beginner as well and hopefully i'll be of some help to you. Here Goes.....

First up, you got some really good sounds in there.
Those atmospheres rock! :Smile3:
Its got a really nice flow. very calm but beautiful! :Smile3:

But i think in the middle of the track you might need a few more sounds eh? check it out.
all the panning and reverbs work really well.

Also, i am more a bassline freak! :P maybe if you got the bass in the front a little more it'll give it that driving feeling. don;t know if you want that.

AAAHH, the lead that comes in towards the end, with the squelch kinda lead (?)around the 2/3rd mark(can't see the times, didn;t download it) is beautiful!!! I Love it! :Grin: use it more! heheheh...

Again, the atmospheres around the same time, rocks! :Smile3:

Am really sorry but i think you need to work on the beginning of the track a little more. Otherwise, overall Super work man!! I really enjoyed the track especially the second part!

Keep at it man and you'll get to wherever you want to be very soon!!! :Smile3:

Best Wishes,
bharath
 

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Thanks for listening Bharath! I totaly agree with what you say about the begining of the track, definetly still a bit flat. I can't quite get the bass sound I want without swamping everything else, but I'd love to get a more driving bassline as you say, it's all about learning at the moment! This is a great place to hang out though for tips etc! Good luck with dusting up your track... I hope you post a new version up soon! Thanks again for listening!
 
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