Hey nice tune man Im not a huge expert in the world of psy production but Its nice and atmospheric/melodic and I like the typewriter-esque sound that makes the odd appearance. The bassline definitely has a jackin' appeal too
sounds good. dont like that fruityloops (?) guitar sound thing and the bass needs to be much beefier i reckon. its sound nice but it never really gets going, it kinda sounds like its gonna kick off but stays very ambient throughout, maybe thats what you were after but to me it sounds like it should go somewhere - needs more layers maybe.
some of your fx are pretty cool and the synth lines are great.