New tracks - comments please!

Mr Strangelove

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Hey chaps...

Got a couple of new tracks soon to be released, would very much appreciate comments on composition, production and lyrics...

Not psy, sorry, although one of them is a sexy little chillout...

1. Goodbye (Chillout)
Early production - no vocals yet and the whistling is a bit off, but gives you an idea.
http://www.mrstrangelove.com/music/goodbye.mp3

2. Mirror (Er... god knows what genre... pop-ish?)
Finished track, but awaiting a proper vocal recording instead of the ropey bedroom job it's currently got.
http://www.mrstrangelove.com/music/mirror_vocal.mp3

3. Signal (ambient, drum'n'bass, vocals)
Also finished in theory, but again, bedroom vocals, and the lyrics and production are a bit suspect in places.
http://www.mrstrangelove.com/music/signal.mp3

Any comments very much welcomed - cheers guys.

Mr S
 

turkeyphant

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Whoever's singing has a nice enough voice but the ambients ones would be better with no vocals at all in my opinion. Of course, I expect loads of people will disagree with me.
 
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