please give some feedback on this

duBaHoliKc

Junior Members
i like this track a lot ... spinning it this morning at work. love the vocoded sounds & use of panning!
break at 5:43 is hot!
very tight track! do you have other works released?


:::nigel
 

Section Divine

Junior Members
i have nothing released yet... i'm just studying=).

i can upload some other tracks for you, i think you like them if u liked this one
 

seuss

Junior Members
heya,

good sample stuff; i like it :Grin: the echoing fast-delay kick sounds are cool. the hihats sound like they could do with a touch more compression, but maybe that's just my speakers :Wink3:

the panning vocal sounds are nice as well. the synth that comes in at 1:45 is cool, perhaps a little generic but it fits with the overall tone of the track really nicely; and the warm pad sounds & the way they 'stutter' are really well done.

when it kicks in again after the first break it's really cool :Smile3: i like the surging feel of the bassline. perhaps some of the transitions in the next break (at about 3:15) could be a bit smoother, but it keeps building & is constantly changing which makes for a great listening experience.

after the restrained section, the return at 5:40 is good - swirly psychedelic madness, again i think the hihats might be taking a little bit too much of the overall 'soundspace' of the track, but it's pretty captivating throughout!

well done, i like it a lot :Smile3: dosvedanya!
 

duBaHoliKc

Junior Members
"track5" ... now there's a unique track title ... :Wink3:

where do you get your synth tones from? softsynths? or do you play in real-time and then quantize?
definitely some nasty tones!
love the section at 2:15 on Saturn1...
section at 3:15 is tight, nice triplet feel, but might drown out the drums a little bit?
do you master / compress these? seems if you boosted the bass eqs and set a hard limit w/ gain, it might be sound a bit ballsier....

track5 is tight -- i like your style... again i'd say the same thing about compression / eq...

curious to know how you write these ... sequencing vs playing in real time, etc etc....
 

moonunit

Junior Members
mmmmm not bad loose the cowbell, tighten the breaks up and have saturn sound alittle less like Gods chosen people by space tribe.
 

Section Divine

Junior Members
thanks all for feedback=)

duBaHoliKc i write all melodies and sounds note by note in the piano roll, then automate parameters of the softsynths and effects. i use midi-keyboard only to imagine how they will sound, but not for recording in real-time.
 

Rantici

ilikestuff
Well done, liked the track especially the kick rolls and the panning snares. I also liked the arpeggio synth with the varying release time.
I agree with Seuss tho that the hihat on the off-beat could be a bit overpowering on a rig with good top-end.
I also liked the intro with the sound that sounds like a high-passed reverse kick. I think maybe the track could do with another element at each stage to pad it out a bit, either a percussion track or another synth but maybe that's just a matter of personal taste :Smile3:
Out of curiosity, which softsynths are you using? Everyone I know uses different synths and I'd love to know what you use over in Russia (if that is indeed where you are :P )

Anyway nice job, hope this is constructive. Keep writing....
 

Section Divine

Junior Members
yes, i hope im here in russia indeed=)).

the synths are: v-station, triangle2, muon tau pro, pentagon1, plastiCZ, and logic's es2.
 
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