Thanks for the feedback. Not sure about more bass, it seems pretty pronounced as it is - though it's the more melodic kind instead of "background support". I'll keep this in mind.
Here is a new one, similar in style and which I like more:
Ok, I can see you've got the same sound dialled in, so that's clearly your sound.
It may also be that I just massively over-cook the bass on all my tracks...here are another 2 I never got around to finishing, but both have bass levels that are pretty standard for all my stuff. That's part of why I came on here for feedback, to see if the basics were right. I've never had a chance to test any of my stuff on a big rig, and I'm going for that festival trance vibe.