Whats missing?

Speakafreaka Feb 26, 2004

  1. Speakafreaka

    Speakafreaka Champagne Rouletter

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    I'm faaaaiirly happy with this little number, but the last lead is ... wrong somehow.

    any advice, ideas or opinions, on any part of the above track would be gratefully received!

    the url is...

    http://www.soundclick.com/speakafreaka

    there is currently only one track which should make things easy!

    nb - the track is not finished, just getting that way!
     
  2. Crispy

    Crispy Fried for too long

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    Hey dude!
    youve definately got some good ideas. was definately having a little bop there!
    if it was me id probs change the kick (to something with a bit more of a crack in it) and bring the volume of it down a bit. also, i reckon, it would really boost the tune to concentrate on the percussion, get some nice groves going and slip in some crackling snares to get it bouncing. as for the lead line that you reckon sounds slightly wrong, i reckon it sounds pretty cool but theres possibly a bit too much of it (its amazing how much more effective it sometimes is to just tease ya listeners with your big sounds, as you dont want them to start thinking ok time for some other noises, you want them to go "shit i wanna hear that sick sound again!").
    Definately a sweet tune in da making!
    hope thats helpful (i dont know that much so might be wrong about stuff, but just my initial thoughts!) Keep up the good work dude!

    Chris
     
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    Abstraction happy juice

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    fuckin hell! that was impressive. :punk: i agree with chris about the kick, but everything else was storming. good work fella!
     
  4. Speakafreaka

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    thankyou guys - i appreciate that.

    just you wait till you hear my next track!

    its got a kick thats more dangerous than a barreful of snakes (imho). but yes the hyperdrive one is a bit flabby!

    thanks again guys
     
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